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Fordpaw's Journal - 1

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Shipwreck + One Season


Kertouin said his first word today!

He has known me from the beginning—he watches everybeast come and go with interest, but whenever I enter the room his face always brightens.

Today, though, was different.

I had come from the kitchen, bringing Kertouin his meal; although nearly weaned off of his mixture of honeydew and coconut milk, I still give it to him on afternoons to help him settle down for a nap.

Even before I came back to the infirmary, I heard Kertouin giggling along with Sunstar (whom I had left with him while I was out). I smiled as I made my way to the door. As I entered, three headsd turned to see me—Kertouin and Sunstar, obviously, and also Raia, who had graciously agreed to watch them while I ran my errand.

“Hi Fo’paw!” Sunstar said, waving a tiny paw at me. Kertouin looked straight at me, his scar wrinkling as a smile overtook his face.
“Mum!”

I nearly dropped my mug; Mum? He had called me “Mum”!

“Aw, Raid said from her chair. “That is precious!”

I didn’t really hear her; I watched Kertouin crawl to me, his too-large tail dragging behind him like a silver blanket. He babbled in his baby-talk as he came to me, but when he reached me he pushed himself into a sitting position and stretched his arms out in front of him.

“Mum!” he said again. I picked him up and held the mug to his lips, quietly watching him as he drank from it.

I fear that I shall wear everybeast in the mountain out before I tire of showing off Kertouin! Fortunately, though, he seems to enjoy the attention, giggling at the surprised gasps that follow his newfound speech.

~Fordpaw Tussock
Just a snippet I've had floating around for a while . . . naturally, this pertains to my Redwall fanfiction--I wanted to show the bond shared between Fordpaw and her charges, but for the longest time I held off on submitting this. I wanted to add more to it, but today I finally realized that anything else would just be an unnecessary addition.

So--short, sweet, and journalized. Due to the limitations, I had to abridge the title. I've chosen to write from Fordpaw's point of view this time around, partially because Kertouin is (at this point) too young to really say much and partially due to plot-related reasons.

As always, feedback and constructive criticism are appreciated!

Many thanks to :iconpsycrowe: for drawing the preview picture.
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CurlyHairedDemon's avatar
ye gods--an update?!?!?!?!?!?!